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专题03 科技-高考热点话题作文预测

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热点三 科技

(一) 火星探测器

2021年5月,“天 中国首个火星探测器(Mars Probe) “天问一号” (Tianwen 1)于2020年7月23日成功发 射;

问一号”将抵达火星。请你以“China sends up first Mars Probe”为题为校报英文版写一篇英文报道,内容包括:1.“天问一号”成功发射;2.发射的影响;3.你的感想。 注意:

1. 写作词数应为80左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。

_________________________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【满分范文】

Hello everyone!

Hearing that the first Chinese Mars Probe Tian Wen 1 launched on July 23th, 2020 aims to land on Mars around May, 2021, it's a great honor for me to be here to congratulate beforehand on the success. Without doubt, had it not been for the hard work, we Chinese couldn't have gain such great achievements. As a student of my generation, I firmly believe it is a time with both challenges and opportunities, when we could achieve whatever we fight for if we spare no effort to attain the goal. At the same time, the more I know about my country, the deeper love I have for her. Wish China, my motherland, all the best.

That's all. Thanks for your listening. 【分析】

本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生以“China sends up first Mars Probe”为题 为校报英文版写一篇关于中国首个火星探测器(Mars Probe) “天问一号” (Tianwen 1)于2020年7月23日成功发射;2021年5月,“天问一号”将抵达火星的英文报道。 【详解】

第一步:审题 体裁:应用文

时态:根据提示,时态主要为一般现在时。 结构:总分法

总分法指把主题句作为总说,把支持句作为分说,并以这种方式安排所写内容。 要求:

1.“天问一号\"成功发射 2.发射的影响 3.你的感想

第二步:列提纲 (重点词组)

launch on;aim to;land on;it's a great honor for sb to;without doubt;hard work;fight for;spare no effort to 第三步:连词成句

1.Hearing that the first Chinese Mars Probe Tian Wen 1 launched on July 23th, 2020 aims to land on Mars around May, 2021, it's a great honor for me to be here to congratulate beforehand on the success.

2.Without doubt, had it not been for the hard work, we Chinese couldn't have gain such great achievements. 3.As a student of my generation, I firmly believe it is a time with both challenges and opportunities, when we could achieve whatever we fight for if we spare no effort to attain the goal. 根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。 第四步:连句成篇(衔接词)(供参考)

1.表文章结构顺序:First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last

2.表并列补充关系:What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,

3.表转折对比关系:However, On the contrary, but, Although +clause(从句), In spite of +n/doing, On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that… 4.表因果关系:Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result

连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰。 【点睛】

[高分句型1]:Without doubt, had it not been for the hard work, we Chinese couldn't have gain such great achievements.这句话运用了对过去假设的虚拟语气。

[高分句型2]:As a student of my generation, I firmly believe it is a time with both challenges and opportunities,

when we could achieve whatever we fight for if we spare no effort to attain the goal.这句话运用了whatever引导的宾语从句。

[高分句型3]:At the same time, the more I know about my country, the deeper love I have for her.这句话运用了the+比较级,the+比较级的结构。

(二) 云端科技与生活

网络时代的到来,已把网络带入老百姓的日常生活,现在许多人都在用科技网络来展示自己生活的点滴。

假定你是李华,上周你校举办了首届生活技能云端展示活动,主题为“劳动创造美好生活( Work Creates a Better Life)”。请你为校英文报写一篇报道,内容包括: 1.活动主题;

2.展示内容(烹任、急救等); 3.活动反响。 注意:

1.写作词数应为80左右;

2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

The First Online Life Skills Show

____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【满分范文】

The first online life skills show with the theme of Work Creates a Better Life was held in our school hall last Friday morning, which drew the attention of every student and teacher.

Twenty students from different classes took part in it. All the participants made wonderful presentations around the theme, showing the audience the skills about cooking and first aid,which is of great use in our daily life. Everyone thinks highly of this activity, for it is not only a good chance to help the students improve their life

skills but also enriches our school life. 【分析】

本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生用英语为主题为“劳动创造美好生活( Work Creates a Better Life)”的活动写一篇报道。 【详解】 第一步:审题 体裁:应用文

时态:根据提示,时态主要为一般过去时和一般现在时。 结构:总分法

总分法指把主题句作为总说,把支持句作为分说,并以这种方式安排所写内容。 要求: 1.活动主题;

2.展示内容(烹任、急救等); 3.活动反响。 第二步:列提纲

with the theme of; draw attention; take part in; be of great use; think highly of 第三步:连词成句

1. The first online life skills show with the theme of Work Creates a Better Life was held in our school hall last Friday morning, which drew the attention of every student and teacher. 2. Twenty students from different classes took part in it.

3. All the participants made wonderful presentations around the theme, showing the audience the skills about cooking and first aid, which is of great use in our daily life.

4. Everyone thinks highly of this activity, for it is not only a good chance to help the students improve their life skills but also enriches our school life.

根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。 第四步:连句成篇

1.表并列补充关系:and,not only…but (also) 2.表因果关系:for

连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰。 【点睛】

[高分句型1] The first online life skills show with the theme of Work Creates a Better Life was held in our school hall last Friday morning, which drew the attention of every student and teacher.(which引导非限定性定语从句) [高分句型2] Everyone thinks highly of this activity, for it is not only a good chance to help the students improve their life skills but also enriches our school life.(for引导原因状语从句)

(三)抖音与传统文化

假如你是李华,你的英国朋友Jim在抖音(Tik Tok)上看到中国校园“花式课间操(innovative exercises)”的视频很感兴趣,发邮件向你咨询。请你给他回复,要点包括:

1.“花式课间操”的内容:将传统文化元素融入课间操(such as Tai Chi, folk dance, etc.) 2.花式课间操的意义。 注意:

1.词数80左右;

2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。 Dear Jim,

____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________________

Yours, Li Hua

【满分范文】 Dear Jim,

Learning that you are interested in the short video about innovative exercises posted on Tik Tok, I’m writing to

share with you some detailed information.

As you can see, Chinese students do group exercises between classes every day to stay fit. Interestingly, some school exercises have grown popular online due to their local and innovative designs. For example, some school combine Tai Chi, an ancient martial art, with daily exercise while others blend the elements of local culture like folk dance and Sichuan Opera.

Apparently, I am strongly for the idea to adopt innovative exercises between classes. It not only promotes students’ enthusiasm about workout but also help students appreciate traditional culture.

What do you think of it? If you want to learn these new type of exercises, you can follow the video on Tik Tok to practice them.

Yours, Li Hua

【分析】

本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生给英国朋友Jim写封回复邮件,向他介绍中国校园“花式课间操”。 【详解】 第一步:审题 体裁:应用文

时态:根据提示,时态主要为一般现在时。

结构:三段式结构。第一段讲述写信目的;第二段介绍“花式课间操”的相关内容;第三段表达个人看法并询问对方看法。 要求:

1. 讲述写信目的;

2. 介绍“花式课间操”:内容;意义。 3. 表达个人看法并询问对方的看法。 第二步:列提纲(重点词组)

be interested in; share with; as sb. know; stay fit; due to; combine sth with sth; be for; not only… but also; think of 第三步:连词成句

1. Learning that you are interested in the short video about innovative exercises posted on Tik Tok, I’m writing to share with you some detailed information.

2. As you can see, Chinese students do group exercises between classes every day to stay fit.

3. Interestingly, some school exercises have grown popular online due to their local and innovative designs.

4. For example, some school combine Tai Chi, an ancient martial art, with daily exercise while others blend the elements of local culture like folk dance and Sichuan Opera.

5. Apparently, I am strongly for the idea to adopt innovative exercises between classes.

6. It not only promotes students’ enthusiasm about workout but also help students appreciate traditional culture. 根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。 第四步:连句成篇(衔接词) 1.表并列补充关系:not only… but also 2.表对比关系:some…while others…

连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰。 【点睛】

[高分句型1]Learning that you are interested in the short video about innovative exercises posted on Tik Tok, I’m writing to share with you some detailed information.(使用现在分词作状语,that引导的宾语从句)

[高分句型2]For example, some school combine Tai Chi, an ancient martial art, with daily exercise while others blend the elements of local culture like folk dance and Sichuan Opera.(使用while作为并列连词,前后句构成对比关系)

[高分句型3]It not only promotes students’ enthusiasm about workout but also help students appreciate traditional culture.(使用“not only…but also”作为并列连词,前后构成递进关系)

(四) 三代农夫

图画作文

Directions: Write an English composition in 120—150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 请仔细阅读以下三幅图片《三代农夫》(Three Generations of Farmers)并完成写作。 在写作中,你必须: 1)简要描述三幅图片中的内容; 2)分析其背后所反映的现象及原因; 3) 对你的启示。

【满分范文】

Fifty years ago, grandfathers worked in the land with oxen. Thirty years ago, my parents used small walking tractors in their fields. Today, farmers use large tractors and plant protection drones.

In fact, in recent years, China has promoted the modernization of agriculture through a series of measures such as the rural revitalization strategy. It is necessary to cultivate high-quality farmers' feelings and responsibilities for agriculture, strengthen the feelings of \"three agriculture\and sustainable development.

Looking at the work of three generations, I am filled with emotion. The past two generations' glorious retirement will be recorded in the history, remembering the struggle and prosperity of Chinese farmers who persevered, innovated and pursued progress. 【分析】

本篇书面表达属于图画作文。根据题中所提供的三幅图片《三代农夫》(Three Generations of Farmers)完成写作。 【详解】 第一步:审题 体裁:图画作文

时态:根据提示,时态主要为一般现在时和一般过去时。 结构:总分法

总分法指把主题句作为总说,把支持句作为分说,并以这种方式安排所写内容。 要求:

1)简要描述三幅图片中的内容; 2)分析其背后所反映的现象及原因; 3) 对你的启示。

第二步:列提纲 (重点词组)

Fifty years ago;In fact;promote the modernization of agriculture;a series of measures;responsibilities for agriculture;be filled with 第三步:连词成句

1. Thirty years ago, my parents used small walking tractors in their fields.

2. In fact, in recent years, China has promoted the modernization of agriculture through a series of measures such as the rural revitalization strategy.

3. Today, farmers use large tractors and plant protection drones. 4. Looking at the work of three generations, I am filled with emotion. 根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。 第四步:连句成篇(衔接词)(仅供参考)

1.表文章结构顺序:First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last

2.表并列补充关系:What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,

3.表转折对比关系:However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that… 4.表因果关系:Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result

连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰。 【点睛】

[高分句型1] Today, farmers use large tractors and plant protection drones.(运用现在分词作状语) [高分句型2] The past two generations' glorious retirement will be recorded in the history, remembering the struggle and prosperity of Chinese farmers who persevered, innovated and pursued progress.(运用关系代词who引导定语从句)

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