常见的一些错误的句子改正

1. TV now plays and important role in our daily life, Because we think itextremely important.TV now plays an important role in our daily life, because it provides uswith messages necessary to us.

Although an opportunity is rare, but we must be ready to seize it.Although opportunities are rare, we must be ready to seize them.Opportunities are rare, but we must be ready to seize them.

With a rise in the number of cars and buses, traffic in Shanghai has becomemore and more crowded.With a rise in the number of cars and buses, traffic in Shanghai hasbecome heavier.

With a rise in the number of cars and buses, Shanghai has become moreand more crowded.

4. Each of us may take a part-time job to help support ourselves, but if youspend too much time on it, your study will be affected.Each of us may take a part-time job to help support himself, but if hespends too much time on it, his academic performance may be affected.5. There are many people complain the paper-making mill pollute our freshwater can by people use.There are many people who complain the paper-making mill polluting ourfresh water used by people.

6. At the age of six, my father began to give me English lessons.At the age of six, I was taught English by my father.

7. Before submitting any written work, careful proofreading must be done.Before submitting any written work, one must do careful proofreading.

8. The computer like TV, it has both advantages and disadvantages.Like computer, TV has both advantages and disadvantages.9. We naturally assumed that they had arrived there. They left severalhours ago.

We naturally assumed that they had arrived there, for they left severalhours ago.

10. When demand for goods was shrinking. Firms would close down or layoff workers.Where demand for goods was shrinking, firms would close down or layoff workers.

11. You have had the disease, you are immune to it for the rest of your life.Once you have had the disease, you are immune to it for the rest of yourlife.

12. Bill yelled at the howling dog in his underwear.In his underwear, Bill yelled at the howling dog.

13. The football game was played in our stadium that was full of excitement.The football game that was full of excitement was played in our stadium.14. However, everything has its black side.

However, there are two sides to everything \\ everything has its drawbacks \\ everything has its pros and cons. 或 However, everything has its dark\\negative side.

15. My level of English has thus been improved.My English has thus been improved.