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苍南县龙港镇第三中学
设计者：林金意
一、九年级书面表达要求
1、书写端正。能正确使用标点符号。
2、细心审题，信息点要全面。
3、格式正确：如书信格式、广告格式、邀请函等。
4、尽量用所学的漂亮语言来表达，注意单词的正确拼写。
行文要连贯，符合逻辑，重点突出。
5、用正确的时态，特别注意动词的形式。
二、书面表达批阅符号
1、单词或句子下划“ ”线，表示该单词或句子存在语法、词性、拼写、语序等错误。
2、单词间穿插符号“∧”，表示该处缺少单词。
3、单词被符号“﹨”划掉，表示要去掉该单词。
4、在单词、词组或句子下划“ ”，表示好词好句。
5、在所有需要订正的地方，老师都会标上“①②③„„”符号。
三、书面表达订正要求
1、在订正处按老师标上的序号逐一认真订正。
2、在“我的收获”处按序号写部分错误的反思与收获。
四、书面表达激励性评价细则
1、书面表达得A等的加5分、B等的加3分、C等的加1分。
2、加“ ”线的好词好句每个加一分。
3、认真订正者加5分。不认真订正者不给分。没有订正者扣5分。
4、认真填写“我的收获”者加5分。没有填写者扣5分。
5、不完成书面表达者扣10分。
6、书写工整者加1分。
7、学期结束时，老师会根据总得分及具体的情况评选出优秀学生。人数不受限制。 五、评价表
五、评价表
序号 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 批阅得分 好词好句得分 订正得分 反思得分 书写得分 总计 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 21 22 23 24 25 26 27 28 29 30 31 32 评价续表
序 号 33 批阅得分 好词好句得分 订正得分 反思得分 书写得分 总 计 34 35 36 37 38 39 40 41 42 43 44 45 46 47 48 49 50 51 52 53 54 55 56 57 58 59 60 61 62 63 64
附录Ⅰ：2009年中考书面表达要求
内容要求：叙事，诉求，说明，根据图表报告结果，看图写话，
可能的变化：没有小作文
表面印象：书写，文章长度
文本结构：主题，叙述条理性，逻辑性，文本结构规范
语言水平：词汇，句法，标点符号，词法
即使写上和命题有关的单词也给分，有正确的一两句话有关的话就有三分。
附录Ⅱ
附录Ⅲ：中考评分说明：
本题满分为15分，按5个档次给分。各档次的给分范围和要求：
（15—13分）第一档：能写出全部要点，表达清楚，行文连贯，语言基本无误，有自己的发挥。
（12—10分）第二档：能基本写出要点，语言虽有若干错误，但能表达
基本意思。
（9 — 7 分） 第三档：能写出大部分要点，语言虽有较多错误，但尚能表达一定意思。
（6 — 4 分） 第四档：能写出部分要点或表达基本意思的部分短语。
（3 — 0 分） 第五档：白卷、或只言片语、或文不对题、不知所云。
附录Ⅲ：常用的英语谚语
A bad beginning makes a bad ending. 不善始者不善终。 Actions speak louder than words. 事实胜于雄辩。 A friend in need is a friend indeed. 患难见真情。
A good beginning is half done. 良好的开端是成功的一半。 A good beginning makes a good ending. 善始者善终。
A good book is a good friend. 好书如挚友。 A good medicine tastes bitter. 良药苦口。
All roads lead to Rome. 条条大路通罗马。 A mother's love never changes. 母爱永恒。
An apple a day keeps the doctor away. 一天一苹果，不用请医生。
Do it now. 机不可失，时不再来。 Doing is better than saying. 说得好，不如做得好。
Don't trouble trouble until trouble troubles you. 不要自找麻烦。 East or west, home is best. 金窝、银窝，不如自己的草窝。
Every day is not Sunday. 好景不常在。
Every dog has his day. 谁都有得意的时候。 Every minute counts. 分秒必争。 It is better to give than to take. 施比受有福。
It is hard to please all. 众口难调。
It is never too old to learn. 活到老，学到老。
No news is good news. 没有消息就是好消息。
No one can call back yesterday. 昨日不会重现。
No pains, no gains. 没有付出就没有收获。
No sweet without sweat. 先苦后甜。
Where there's life there's hope. 留得青山在，不怕没柴烧
Where there is a will, there is a way. 有志者事竟成。
Will is power. 意志就是力量。
附录Ⅳ：初中7-9年级课文优美句子
7年级下册
1.I like going to the movies with my friends and playing sports.
2.Bridge Street is a good place to have fun.
3.I hope you have a good trip.
4.We have a job fou you as a shop assistant.
5. Thanks for your letter and the photos. Here are some of my photos.
6. Thanks for joining CCTV’s Around The World show.
7. It’s a beautiful and sunny day! There are many people here on vacation.
8. I am surprised they can play in this heat.
9. She’s good-looking but she’s a little bit quiet.
10. She loves to tell jokes, and she never stops talking.
11. Come and get your noodles today!
12. I had a busy weekend. On Saturday I cleaned my room, on Sunday I visit my grandmother.
13. Do you think everyone enjoys their weekends?
14. We had great fun playing in the water.
15. The shops were too crowded , so I didn’t really enjoy it.
16. I cant’t stand the idea that old people can’t be beautiful. I enjoy nice words about my looks .and I don’t mind what young people think of me.
8年级上册
1.As for homework,most student do homework every day.
2.I’m pretty healthy.
3.Good food and exercise help me to study better.
4.It’s easy to have a healthy lifestyle, and it’s important to eat a balanced diet.
5.Here are photos of me and my twin sister Liu Ying.
6.We both enjoy going to the parties.
7.I don’t think difference are important in a friendship.
8.I’m smarter than Yu.
9.I’m quieter than he is.
10.Rose is more outgoing.
11.It’s not necessary to be the same
12.Last week , we did a survey about different kinds of transportation.
13.Class 9 had a great time on the school trip.
14.Finally , tired but happy, they took the bus back to school.
15.How was your day off ?
16.You are never too young to start doing things.
17.When I grow up,I’m going to do what I want to do.
18.I’m going to move somewhere interesting.
19.Paris sounds like a city that I could enjoy.
20.I also want to travel all over the world .one day, I’m going to retire somewhere quiet and beautiful.
8年级下册
1. I’ll live in Shanghai,because I went to Shanghai last year and I fall in love with it.
2. they help with the housework and do the unpleasant jobs.
3. some will look like humans, and others might look like snakes.
4. we never know what will happen in the future.
5. you could give him a ticket to a ball game.
6. my friend wears the same clothes and has the same haircut as I do.
7. could you please give me some advice?
8. pushy(固执的) parents try to fit(找到时间做某事) as much as possible into their kid’s lives.
9. doctors say many children are under too much pressure(压力).
10. teachers complain about(抱怨) teaching tired kids in the classroom.
11. on the one hand, children need organized activities, on the other hand, they also need time and freedom to relax.
12. I have an unusual experience on Sunday.
13. Isn’t that amazing
14. How strange it is.
15. I hope you are in good health.
16. I had a really hard time with science this semester .
17. That’s about all the news I have for now. 18. Mom and Dad send their love.
19. I said it would start a bad habit and that she should do her own work.
20. It can open up my students’ eyes to the outside world and give them a good start in life.
21. Don’t wear jeans ! If you wear jeans, we won’t let you in.
22. Please bring your ID card. If you don’t have your ID card ,you can’t go to the party.
23. For many young people ,becoming a professional athlete might seem like a dream job .
24. If you do ,you’ll be able to make a living doing something you love .
25. If you become famous, people all over the world will know you. People will watch you all the time and follow you everywhere. This can make life difficult. You will have a difficult time knowing who your real friends are.
26. My mom says I have to stop ,because we’ve run out of room to store them.
27. This is an interesting city with a very colorful history .There is some European influence in the city, and some of the old buildings in Harbin are in Russian style.
28. The more I learn about Chinese history ,the more I enjoy living in China.
29. Would you mind washing the dishes?
30. Could you please feed the dog? 31. Please babysit your little cousin.
32. Also,you have to do your homework.
33. ”Pot-bellied Pigs make the best pets”.
34. However, life with a pig isn’t always perfect.
35. Some presents are never too small.
36. Doing something for someone is the best gift.
37. This kind of contest encourages people in China to speak English .Many people agree that they make progress by singing English songs and that it is a good idea to have fun with English.
38. If you look hard enough , you’ll find a good way to learn English better.
39. When I was a young girl, all I ever wanted to do was travel.
40. Singappore is a wonderful place to take a holiday , it is also a good place to practice your English.
41. One great thing about Singapore is that the temperature is almost the same all year round.
42. I had an argument with my best friend.
43. My clothes are out of style
9年级全册
1.Wei feels differently
2.We get excited about aomething and then end up speaking in Chinese.
3.First of all,…to begin with,…later on,…another thing that I…
4.Rich or poor , young or old , we all have problems.and unless we deal with our problems, we can easily become happy.
5.Sometimes they have disagreements and decided not to talk to each other.
6.As young adults, it is our duty to try our best to deal with each challenge in our education with the help of our teachers.
7.People sue change.
8.I used to be short but I’m tall now.
9.I used to like playing the piano but I like playing the violin now.
10.I go to sleep with my light on.
11.My life has changes a lot in the last few years.
12.My daily life is different and I used to like differenr things when I was a child.
13.It was exactly what I needed.
14.I’ve tried to make my mother pay more attention to me
15.We would concentrate more on our clothes than our studies.
16.I know we get noisy sometines but we learn a lot from each other.
17.Sometimes these hobbies can get in the way of schoolwork
18. I like music that I can sing along with .
19. I love singers who write their own music .
20. We prefer music that has great lyrics .
21. Whatever you do , don’t miss this exhibition .
22. There are lots of different kinds of food here .
23. To be honest , I only eat food that tastes good .
24. Food that is bad for you can taste good .
25. I want to take care of my health , so I eat mainly fruit and vegetables .I stay away from sugar .
26. I think most people are in agreement that fruit and vegetables are good for health . I would say that fast food itself isn’t always bad for you , but too much of it is not good .
27. People who eat a balanced diet should be healthier than those who only eat biscuits and hamburgers , shouldn’t they ? The main thing is to have a good balance.
28. I love places where the people are really friendly.
29. I like places where the weather is always warm .
30. I’d like to go somewhere relaxing.
31. They want to do jobs they enjoys.
32. It is very important to dream , so hold on to your dreams ; one day they may just come true.
33. He looks sad . Let’s cheer him up.
34. We’re going to set up a food bank to help hungry people.
35. We need to come up with some ideas .
36. It was invented in 1885.
37. They were invented last year .
38. They were invented by Julie Thompson .
39. They’re used for seeing in the dark
40.This much-loved and active sport is enjoyed by many, for fun and exercise.
41.Basketball has become a more popular sport for people to watch , and many young people dream of becoming of famous basketball player.
42 By the time she got up, her brother had already gone into the bathroom.
43. If they love good food, they can find it at the market where the food id both delicious and cheap.
44. Hope you’re having a good school year.
45. Rainy days make me sad
46.Loud music makes me tense.
47.It really made me feel embarrassed, because to be honest, I thoght the purse was really ugly.
48.Different people have different thoughts on this subject.
49.Now in China, he has found that his family is like a tall tree with long roots.
50.Zoos are important places. They are like living textbooks for young people.
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